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Soujiro89

First, the Logo. The words "Lunas "The Beggining"" are kind of not so well drawn, if you know what i mean, it needs some final retouches, maybe making it softer or something like that.

Second i have to say Good job for convinating Gold with Crystal Orbs, it really matches, and gives an air of Rpg.

Third i suggest you not using So many images for the forums/subforums desctriptions, i know that a picture represents thousand words, but images are overated. Sometimes a fine summary with some descriptions and a rule may make it

Fourth, i know its an big Rpg stuff, but is it necesarry so many forums and sub forums? Sometimes there is a limit in it, and mostly it doesnt fit such a big ammount if you use so many pictures. Id say sometimes more simple, that attracts by simplicity. I correct myself, not simplicity, but a fine balance between that what you wish or want (and think that looks good), and that what looks good for the first visitor.

My first impression was too many things added (again, pics, stuff, links, etc). If you wanna save up space, use stickies, announcements that lead you to the desired place, after all you cannot avoid a noob asking for the link to *blah*, it will happen even if you place so many stuff.

I play JKA, with a mod where you can build stuff, the thing ive learn with this is:

1 there is a limit on entities (this can be applyed for those stuff you added, links, pics, etc) [in jka this limit is reached out by technical dificulties ^^]
2 that it looks newbish to spam all you can add just cause you know the codes.
3 that the first a new guy notices is the look, therefor the beauty is the most important.
4 if you can restrain yourself from adding stuff, do it, cause the less you have (from extra stuff) the better.

A saying we have on jka "dont go over 700 entities" just proves my theory, that you'd better dont pass the top unless its REALLY NECESARY.

Well, i hope this helps you get an idea of what people think at first sight ^_^

Btw, fix that logo :P

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